Sunday, November 20, 2005

hanging

What then
when all the words
have been written
and all that is left
is life
moving on
without you?

3 comments:

grunherz said...

Nice poem.

"What then
when all the words
have been written ..."

What the ex-intern will be writing soon hopefully since she's back again!

said...

i'm glad you commented.

i honestly enjoyed indulging myself with your writing, it was interesting to think abt..

mine is just some random madness that i can't write out quite like it is in my mind anyway..

hope you visit soon =]

Billy said...

Your short work is very well executed. Nice compression of ideas. Very poignant.