Saturday, October 15, 2005

mine

in this darkened corner
i hold the two pieces
of a long-forgotten puzzle

as the shadows lengthen
and the echoing
moans of a broken soul deepen

6 comments:

shyloh said...

Short and excellent. Nice job.

Jeff said...

I took some time to read your work. Thank you for sharing, it is quite good.

Blueprincesa said...

I like the structure of this one. Nice parallelism.

grunherz said...

Sometimes less is more.

Actually all the time.

By the way. The ex-intern is back!

feminine expressions said...

i read this poem again and again...

and then once again...

i have no words for such achingly beautiful profound depth...

i cannot speak but simply read and feel the heart of its anguish, the beat of its truth...

cargwaps said...

thank you everybody for taking the time to read my blog and even more for leaving your precious comments. thank you! hugs to all of you! ^___^